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:::: is the lead too long? I've tried to introduce the sections in the main body and to relate them to one another a bit, but it looks like a lot of words. | :::: is the lead too long? I've tried to introduce the sections in the main body and to relate them to one another a bit, but it looks like a lot of words. | ||
:::: I think the length is fine. I'd say its about as long as a wiki lead can get without being unwieldy. I certainly wouldn't make it any longer is all. Great work. |