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| ''he must have been a good stepfather to Hala and Hind, for they remained unswervingly loyal to him.'' | | ''he must have been a good stepfather to Hala and Hind, for they remained unswervingly loyal to him.'' | ||
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| This sentence is drawing conclusions that are not present in the original text. | | This sentence is drawing conclusions that are not present in the original text. Stepchildren remaining loyal could equally suggest that Muhammad was a strict and uncaring disciplinarian. But since neither conclusion is supported by facts, commenting on them should be avoided. | ||
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| ''Juwayriya was sweet-natured, charming and as alluringly beautiful as a fairy; men became infatuated with her at first sight.'' | | ''Juwayriya was sweet-natured, charming and as alluringly beautiful as a fairy; men became infatuated with her at first sight.'' | ||