User talk:Matheosharison: Difference between revisions

Lowest land

The article at WikiIslam:Sandbox/Lowest Point on Earth Miracle will need a lot of work before it can go into the main space for example:

• extra spaces after a comma - delete
• capitalization:
  • starting sentences are with a capital letter
  • Capitalization for headings
• double periods (.. , ...) - need to be deleted
• Possibly other things

And writing style needs to be fixed for the entire article after that. After you are done with the text of the article and putting in what you want to put in, can you make the above fixes you can and then we can put it in out to-do list to fix the rest?

Do you have a friend who can help in this? --Axius (talk) 04:49, 18 February 2014 (PST)

guys my english is very bad ,someone has to fix my article , thank u .. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Matheosharison (talk • contribs) (Remember to sign your comments)

Can you atleast fix the things above? After that we'll put it in our to do list to fix the rest, which will take a long time (see our list of tasks). --Axius (talk) 05:23, 18 February 2014 (PST)

If it's going to be put on the to-do list, I think it needs more fixes than those listed above. A lot of the points need expanding on and clarification. For example, the part that says "and the most special dictionary among them is (the standards of language) dictionary .. which states that .." and then goes on to quote Arabic. I have no idea what dictionary and edition/page this is referring to. And Matheosharison's English is not an issue. He clearly writes and understands the language well enough to rewrite it in a manner that is more suitable. Of course a final copy-edit would still be made by someone who is fluent. --Sahabah (talk) 05:40, 18 February 2014 (PST)

Oh yea the to do list means that parts of all of the article would need to be re-worked and all or part of it could be deleted if its not found to be viable. I havent read the text.

Matheosharison it will take a very long time to review your article (until then it will not available for visitors) and determine if its a good fit for our site or not. All of parts of it will be deleted depending on what we think of it in the end. You can help by reviewing it and making it the best that you can. --Axius (talk) 06:06, 18 February 2014 (PST)

i ll do my best , i ll a friend to help me , after i do i ll notify you to tell me what more improvements is still needed .—Preceding unsigned comment added by Matheosharison (talk • contribs) (Remember to sign your comments)

Ok thank you. You can edit this talk page and not create a new section on another talk page. --Axius (talk) 10:22, 18 February 2014 (PST)

Sahab, we can probably move these kinds of temporary pages to the main Sandbox URL like: WikiIslam:Sandbox/Lowest Point on Earth Miracle because otherwise it somehow restricts others from working on a page like this, so I did that for this page. --Axius (talk) 15:36, 18 February 2014 (PST)

Cool. I see what you mean. That's a good idea. I'll suggest that from now on. --Sahabah (talk) 15:55, 18 February 2014 (PST)

::::::--Sahabah If u like, U can freely edit the content, For the page to be puplished, Cause i cant do better, if u find any difficulties, u can ask me. thank u.