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| ''He is not specific on the time frame, offering a number of years but nothing definitive. He does not mention any names, fails to mention where these events took place, and does not state when this story happened.'' | | ''He is not specific on the time frame, offering a number of years but nothing definitive. He does not mention any names, fails to mention where these events took place, and does not state when this story happened.'' | ||
| Do not use contracted forms (e.g. "doesn't", "isn't") when you should use "is not", "does not" etc. | | Do not use contracted forms (e.g. "doesn't", "isn't") when you should use "is not", "does not" etc. | ||
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| ''So how, we must ask, is the early universe anything like "smoke"?'' | |||
| ''There is no similarities between the early universe and smoke.'' | |||
| The use of first or second person in writing ("we" and addressing the reader) should be avoided. Either reword or remove these sections. | |||
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